2011年10月28日金曜日

Draft2

The Internet- Innovative Invention

“There was no danger because the fuel rods were stable and being cooled”: this is the phrase that Tokyo Electric Power Company (TEPCO) and the media in Japan used and uses again and again when accidents about nuclear plant are reported (“Radiation”). However, it is completely doubtful. People did hear this phrase when the media reported there was no meltdown but after that, it turned out that meltdown was partially under way (“Radiation”). Even after this fact was announced, the media used the same phrase: there was no danger (“Radiation”). Actually the meltdown was NOT PARTIAL but its incident level was 7 as the same to Chernobyl (“Hukuashima”). What on the earth could the media use the phrase which is not based on the reality. What is more, the media in Japan is STILL reporting that there is no risk to human health. Yet, the media in abroad is reporting completely different an outlook. According to CBS News, Japanese government is telling residents in Hukushima that there is no risk but many international experts don’t support this outlook. They say that there does exist the risk, especially for children (CBS). ABC News also criticized that Japanese government forces unnecessary risks to the childrens. The influence on children is difficult to estimate so Japanese government should take action in order to save such a little lives. However, Japanese can’t know that sort of opinion on the TV or newspapers because the media don’t report the news which danger existence of the nuclear plant. What people can is try to get the information through the Internet or ask the experts. 99,182,000 and 78.4%: this is the latest data of the number of the Internet users in Japan and the penetration based on Japanese population according to Internet world Stats, which is an international website that shows world Internet usage from 233 countries. When we look at the situation in the world, there are 2,095,006,005 users on March 31, 2011 (Internet). Can you imagine that huge number of the people is using the Internet, which just born decades ago. However, in Japan, mass media still occupy majority, and general citizens don’t have the opportunity and never come to mind to express their idea to public by themselves (Waltz 4). But as seen in the incident in Fukushima, Society has to take an action to make it clear what is the truth. In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Society should utilize the Internet as alternative media. It is true that there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, but benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, people no longer live as independent citizens because they cannot handle the real information.
Using the Internet as alternative media provides us three advantages. First, it enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily. Second, it enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want. Third, it enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or companies, which have strong power.
 First, let’s look at the first advantage: easy to get and easy to develop. It means that the Internet can help people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily. This facility is supported by two factors provided by the characteristics of the Internet. One is that the internet is free of restriction of place and the other is that the internet is free of restriction of time. Thanks to this characteristic, people can get any information wherever they live and whenever they want. Second advantage is possibility of both-side thinking. It means that because of the diversity of the information on the internet, people can look at the issue from various perspectives. Third advantage is easy to form opinions. This means that, as citizens, people can use the power of majority. For example, demonstration against nuclear plant was taken place in shinzyuku, koenzi. It shows that the internet make citizens’ activity more lively.
      Unfortunately, however, there does exist disadvantages. First disadvantage is possibility to attack certain people or group overwhelmingly, or to cause a panic in public. Second disadvantage is that it hard to detect which sources are more factual.  
It is true that there exsit disadvantages sutated above, but benefits are more crucial. If we pursue a perfection, people can use nothing. Society has to take the failure steps for the success.
However, If Japanese society will really promote the Internet as the alternative media, people have to pay attention to a changing in the Internet. Recently in the U.S, an argument about the internet access has been occurred and be in a process: Net neutrality. Net neutrality is the concept that Internet service companies should treat all information on the Internet equally (“Net”), in other word, the companies cannot control their Internet access speed depending on consumers payings.  However in the U.S, it has been the center of a debate over whether those companies can give preferential treatment to content providers who pay for faster transmission, or to their own content, in effect creating a two-tier Web, and about whether they can block or impede content representing controversial points of view(NET). Reason why net neutrality should be kept is that it could create risks that the information on the internet could be controlled and the internet could become the media similar to the mass media. This possibility may reduce the advantages of the internet media as I mentioned before Therefore, in order to keep the internet media as a innovative instrument to express own opinions freely and effectively, people should keep the internet access identical to everyone uses the internet. Without this struggle, the internet will lost its power ……
In order to make efficient use of the Internet, both people and society always have to have one things in their mind. For a society, Net neutrality and for peoples, critical thinker.

1) Be aware of disadvantages and 2) Be a critical thinker.
          

 As shown above, the Internet do have the power to change the situation in Japan and promote citizens’ activities.  In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Japanese society should utilize the Internet and use the Internet as the tool of exchanging ideas. Without changing the concept toward the Internet, Japanese no longer live as independent citizens. In other word, we no longer mention the disadvantage, but we must look at and take the advantages more. The internet is wonderful tool to promote real democracy.

2011年10月18日火曜日

DRAFT need more time and efforts

Miyashita 1
Hisae Miyashita
Professor Christianson
ARW Section: BD
15 October 2011
6th Draft
Alternative media, the Internet

Research Question
 How should Japanese use alternative media to avoid media control?

Thesis Statement
In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Japanese society should utilize the Internet as alternative media. Although there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, Japanese no longer live as independent citizens.

. Introduction
           A. (Hook) Facts about earthquake in Tohoku were concealed
           B. (Background) Current situation of the Internet and media
           C. Thesis statement

. Advantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
          A. Enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily
                  1. Power of Creative
Discussions on the Internet by using blogs or facebook and so on.
                  2. Power of Controversial
⇒Information on the Internet is diverse and arguments are also diverse.
                  3. Power of Changeable
                             ⇒
          B. Enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want
                  1. Diversity of the information
                  2. less censorship
         C. Enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or
companies .
  1. Power of Majority
⇒demonstration against nuclear plant  

. Disadvantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
  1. The current wave which corapse Net Neutrality.
  2. Power of majority may overwhelmingly attack people and  cause a panic.
  3. It hard to detect which sources are more factual.   

. Solutions
  1. Be aware of disadvantages
  2. Be a critical thinker

. Conclusion
A. Repeat thesis and main points
        B.


Works cited
オルタナティブ・メディア : 変革のための市民メディア入門
http://www.rui.jp/ruinet.html?c=400&i=200&m=202105
http://www.dreamgrow.com/world-map-of-social-networks-2010/

http://www.globalresearch.ca/index.php?context=va&aid=25204 RADIATION: It's Official: "Nuclear Fuel Has Melted Through Base of Fukushima Plant" by Washington's Blog


The Internet- Innovative Invention

“There was no danger because the fuel rods were stable and being cooled” (Radiation): this is the phrase that TEPCO and the media in Japan used and uses again and again when accidents about nuclear plant are reported. However, it is completely doubtful. People did hear this phrase when the media reported there was no meltdown but after that, it turned out that meltdown was partially under way (Radiation). Even after this fact was announced, the media used the same phrase: there was no danger (Radiation).Actually the meltdown was NOT PARTIAL but its incident level was 7 as the same to Chernobyl (Radiation).What on the earth could the media use the phrase which is not based on the reality. What is more, the media in Japan is STILL reporting that there is no risk to human health. Yet, the media abroad is reporting completely different an outlook. ~find sourse~~says that they can’t believe there in Fukushima, people still live. ~~find sourse~~~says the influence on children is difficult to estimate and Japanese government should take action in order to save such  little lives. However, Japanese can’t know that sort of opinion on the TV or newspapers because the media don’t report the news which danger existence of the nuclear plant. What people can is try to get the information through the Internet or ask the experts.    
99,182,000 and 78.4%: this is the latest data of the number of the Internet users in Japan and the penetration based on Japanese population according to Internet world Stats, which is an international website that shows world Internet usage from 233 countries. When we look at the situation in the world, now 2,095,006,005 people are using the Internet (Internet). Can you imagine that huge number of the people are using the Internet, which just born decades ago (source). However, in Japan, mass media still occupy majority, and general citizens don’t have the opportunity and never come to mind to express their idea to public by theirself (Waltz).
But as seen in the incident in Fukushima, Society has to take an action to make it clear what is the truth. In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Society should utilize the Internet as alternative media. It is true that there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, but benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, People no longer live as independent citizens.
Using the Internet as alternative media provides us three advantages. First, it enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily. Second, it enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want. Third, it enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or companies. First, let’s look at the first advantage: easy to get and easy to develop. In other word, the Internet has the power of 3Cs. The meanings of the 3Rs are the followings: 1) power of CRIATIVE, 2) power of CONTROVERSIAL and 3) power of CHANGEABLE. What I mean by power of CRIATIVE is that the world on the Internet is filled with creative stuff and that creative situation gives us an exciting discussing opportunity. For instance, creative tools such as blogs and SNSs (social network service) provide people fields to discuss the issue occur in the real world. Now that many people use facebook and blogs to share idea, the power is inebitabke. Seond power, CONTROVERSIAL means that information on the Internet is divers and that situation help people to argue from the various perspectives. Third power, CHANGEBLE means that the Internet has potential to overturn the imperfect situation.
Second advantage is possibility of both-side thnking. It means that because of the diversity of the information on the internet, people can look at the issue from variouse pespectives and can get the information whenever they want.
Third advantage is easy to form opinions. This means that, as citizens, people can use the power of majority. For example, demonstration against nuclear plant was take place in shinzuku, koenzi. It shows that the internet make citizens’ activity more lovely.
     Unfortunately, however, there does exist disadvantages. First disadvantage is possibility to attack certain people overwelmingly or to cause a panic in public. Second advantage is that it hard to detect which sources are more factual.   
It is true that there exsit disadvantages sutated above, but benefits are more crucial.If we pursue a perfection, people can use nothing. Society have to take the failures steps for the success. In order to make efficient use of the Internet, people always have to have 2 thngs in their mind. 1) Be aware of disadvantages and 2) Be a critical thinker.
           As shown above, the Internet do have the power to change the situation in Japan and promote citizens’ activities.  In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Japanese society should utilize the Internet and use the Internet as the tool of exchanging ideas. Without changing the concept toward the Internet, Japanese no longer live as independent citizens. In other word, we no longer mention the disadvantage, such as Deaikei Site, but we must look at and take the advantages more. The internet is wonderful tool to promote real democracy.

2011年10月7日金曜日

Outline of My Essay


 Research Question
  How should Japanese use alternative media to avoid media control?

Thesis Statement
In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, we should utilize the Internet as alternative media. Although there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, we no longer live as independent citizens.

. Introduction
            A. (Hook) news about earthquake in Tohoku
            B. (Background) current situation of the Internet and media
            C. Thesis statement

. Advantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
           A. Enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily
                   1. Power of Creativity
Discussions on the Internet by using blogs or facebook and so on.
                   2. Power of Controversial
Information on the Internet is diverse and arguments are also diverse.
                   3. Power of Changeable
                              Revolution in Libya
           B. Enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want
                   1. Diversity of the information
                   2. less censorship
          C. Enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or
 companies .
1.       Power of Majority
demonstration against nuclear plant  
                    2.

. Disadvantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
A.     There exist a fear of media control which is completely hidden.
B.     Power of majority may overwhelmingly attack people and  cause a panic.

. Opinion
A.     Be aware of disadvantages
B.     A method of getting reasonable information

. Conclusion
A. Repeat thesis and main points
        B.


Sources
オルタナティブ・メディア : 変革のための市民メディア入門
http://www.rui.jp/ruinet.html?c=400&i=200&m=202105
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/41911692/ns/technology_and_science-security/t/internet-traffic-libya-goes-dark-amid-upheaval/#.To56YnKuRBV

2011年10月4日火曜日

Essay idea (need to be more SPECIFIC)

1. What is the issue you plan to research and write about?
    importance of view of science


2. Why is the issue important? What is the significance?
   In my opinion, scientific view can provide us objective thinking because science rely on numbers and these things has only one fact even if people have different perceptions (written in ELP reader). so scientific facts like statistics can be a measure to identify a fact.


3. Why are you interested in this? What’s the connection to YOU?
   because I'm interested in Physics and I always believe that objective view of thinking is important for science. and I motivated to search this topic by disaster in Tohoku. It gives me an impression Japanese meadia and government should show more statistics about this disaster, such as problem of atomic plant.


4. What questions do you have about this issue? What do you want to find out?
  How can we decide without statistics(evidence)?
  How much our life is supported by science? (→if so, we need to have knowledge about science somehow)