2011年10月18日火曜日

DRAFT need more time and efforts

Miyashita 1
Hisae Miyashita
Professor Christianson
ARW Section: BD
15 October 2011
6th Draft
Alternative media, the Internet

Research Question
 How should Japanese use alternative media to avoid media control?

Thesis Statement
In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Japanese society should utilize the Internet as alternative media. Although there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, Japanese no longer live as independent citizens.

. Introduction
           A. (Hook) Facts about earthquake in Tohoku were concealed
           B. (Background) Current situation of the Internet and media
           C. Thesis statement

. Advantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
          A. Enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily
                  1. Power of Creative
Discussions on the Internet by using blogs or facebook and so on.
                  2. Power of Controversial
⇒Information on the Internet is diverse and arguments are also diverse.
                  3. Power of Changeable
                             ⇒
          B. Enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want
                  1. Diversity of the information
                  2. less censorship
         C. Enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or
companies .
  1. Power of Majority
⇒demonstration against nuclear plant  

. Disadvantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
  1. The current wave which corapse Net Neutrality.
  2. Power of majority may overwhelmingly attack people and  cause a panic.
  3. It hard to detect which sources are more factual.   

. Solutions
  1. Be aware of disadvantages
  2. Be a critical thinker

. Conclusion
A. Repeat thesis and main points
        B.


Works cited
オルタナティブ・メディア : 変革のための市民メディア入門
http://www.rui.jp/ruinet.html?c=400&i=200&m=202105
http://www.dreamgrow.com/world-map-of-social-networks-2010/

http://www.globalresearch.ca/index.php?context=va&aid=25204 RADIATION: It's Official: "Nuclear Fuel Has Melted Through Base of Fukushima Plant" by Washington's Blog


The Internet- Innovative Invention

“There was no danger because the fuel rods were stable and being cooled” (Radiation): this is the phrase that TEPCO and the media in Japan used and uses again and again when accidents about nuclear plant are reported. However, it is completely doubtful. People did hear this phrase when the media reported there was no meltdown but after that, it turned out that meltdown was partially under way (Radiation). Even after this fact was announced, the media used the same phrase: there was no danger (Radiation).Actually the meltdown was NOT PARTIAL but its incident level was 7 as the same to Chernobyl (Radiation).What on the earth could the media use the phrase which is not based on the reality. What is more, the media in Japan is STILL reporting that there is no risk to human health. Yet, the media abroad is reporting completely different an outlook. ~find sourse~~says that they can’t believe there in Fukushima, people still live. ~~find sourse~~~says the influence on children is difficult to estimate and Japanese government should take action in order to save such  little lives. However, Japanese can’t know that sort of opinion on the TV or newspapers because the media don’t report the news which danger existence of the nuclear plant. What people can is try to get the information through the Internet or ask the experts.    
99,182,000 and 78.4%: this is the latest data of the number of the Internet users in Japan and the penetration based on Japanese population according to Internet world Stats, which is an international website that shows world Internet usage from 233 countries. When we look at the situation in the world, now 2,095,006,005 people are using the Internet (Internet). Can you imagine that huge number of the people are using the Internet, which just born decades ago (source). However, in Japan, mass media still occupy majority, and general citizens don’t have the opportunity and never come to mind to express their idea to public by theirself (Waltz).
But as seen in the incident in Fukushima, Society has to take an action to make it clear what is the truth. In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Society should utilize the Internet as alternative media. It is true that there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, but benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, People no longer live as independent citizens.
Using the Internet as alternative media provides us three advantages. First, it enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily. Second, it enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want. Third, it enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or companies. First, let’s look at the first advantage: easy to get and easy to develop. In other word, the Internet has the power of 3Cs. The meanings of the 3Rs are the followings: 1) power of CRIATIVE, 2) power of CONTROVERSIAL and 3) power of CHANGEABLE. What I mean by power of CRIATIVE is that the world on the Internet is filled with creative stuff and that creative situation gives us an exciting discussing opportunity. For instance, creative tools such as blogs and SNSs (social network service) provide people fields to discuss the issue occur in the real world. Now that many people use facebook and blogs to share idea, the power is inebitabke. Seond power, CONTROVERSIAL means that information on the Internet is divers and that situation help people to argue from the various perspectives. Third power, CHANGEBLE means that the Internet has potential to overturn the imperfect situation.
Second advantage is possibility of both-side thnking. It means that because of the diversity of the information on the internet, people can look at the issue from variouse pespectives and can get the information whenever they want.
Third advantage is easy to form opinions. This means that, as citizens, people can use the power of majority. For example, demonstration against nuclear plant was take place in shinzuku, koenzi. It shows that the internet make citizens’ activity more lovely.
     Unfortunately, however, there does exist disadvantages. First disadvantage is possibility to attack certain people overwelmingly or to cause a panic in public. Second advantage is that it hard to detect which sources are more factual.   
It is true that there exsit disadvantages sutated above, but benefits are more crucial.If we pursue a perfection, people can use nothing. Society have to take the failures steps for the success. In order to make efficient use of the Internet, people always have to have 2 thngs in their mind. 1) Be aware of disadvantages and 2) Be a critical thinker.
           As shown above, the Internet do have the power to change the situation in Japan and promote citizens’ activities.  In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, Japanese society should utilize the Internet and use the Internet as the tool of exchanging ideas. Without changing the concept toward the Internet, Japanese no longer live as independent citizens. In other word, we no longer mention the disadvantage, such as Deaikei Site, but we must look at and take the advantages more. The internet is wonderful tool to promote real democracy.

2011年10月7日金曜日

Outline of My Essay


 Research Question
  How should Japanese use alternative media to avoid media control?

Thesis Statement
In order to avoid media control and get sufficient and reasonable information, we should utilize the Internet as alternative media. Although there does exist dangers of fully relying on the Internet, benefits are more crucial and without changing the concept toward the Internet, we no longer live as independent citizens.

. Introduction
            A. (Hook) news about earthquake in Tohoku
            B. (Background) current situation of the Internet and media
            C. Thesis statement

. Advantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
           A. Enables people to share ideas and develop knowledge more easily
                   1. Power of Creativity
Discussions on the Internet by using blogs or facebook and so on.
                   2. Power of Controversial
Information on the Internet is diverse and arguments are also diverse.
                   3. Power of Changeable
                              Revolution in Libya
           B. Enables people to look at both side of the news or issues whenever they want
                   1. Diversity of the information
                   2. less censorship
          C. Enables people to gather opinions which may difficult to reach the government or
 companies .
1.       Power of Majority
demonstration against nuclear plant  
                    2.

. Disadvantage of using the Internet as an alternative media
A.     There exist a fear of media control which is completely hidden.
B.     Power of majority may overwhelmingly attack people and  cause a panic.

. Opinion
A.     Be aware of disadvantages
B.     A method of getting reasonable information

. Conclusion
A. Repeat thesis and main points
        B.


Sources
オルタナティブ・メディア : 変革のための市民メディア入門
http://www.rui.jp/ruinet.html?c=400&i=200&m=202105
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/41911692/ns/technology_and_science-security/t/internet-traffic-libya-goes-dark-amid-upheaval/#.To56YnKuRBV

2011年10月4日火曜日

Essay idea (need to be more SPECIFIC)

1. What is the issue you plan to research and write about?
    importance of view of science


2. Why is the issue important? What is the significance?
   In my opinion, scientific view can provide us objective thinking because science rely on numbers and these things has only one fact even if people have different perceptions (written in ELP reader). so scientific facts like statistics can be a measure to identify a fact.


3. Why are you interested in this? What’s the connection to YOU?
   because I'm interested in Physics and I always believe that objective view of thinking is important for science. and I motivated to search this topic by disaster in Tohoku. It gives me an impression Japanese meadia and government should show more statistics about this disaster, such as problem of atomic plant.


4. What questions do you have about this issue? What do you want to find out?
  How can we decide without statistics(evidence)?
  How much our life is supported by science? (→if so, we need to have knowledge about science somehow)


   

2011年9月26日月曜日

Reaction to Fisher

It is interesting and I enjoyed figures written in the text.
In the part of Comparison, it says that we have the desire to be "normal",but what is a evidence?
Especially in ICU, I think almost all people tend to be a strange person...but I somewhat agree author's opinion because my friends in other university seems have that tendency. (However, I have no evidence, neither. It's difficult to prove.)
After I finished reading this book, I feel some kind of fear, because it says that we cannot observe things as  a true figure. It means people cannot share the image, people cannot have a same view.
So critical thinking is needed also in this action, perception and another solution for avoiding misunderstandings among people, we need scientific way of thinking. Now in the field of science, researchers rely on numeral. I regard this way as objective point of view. We cannot share exactly same shapes but if we use math, for example, we can share exactly same shapes!
Hence, I recommend studying math or physics to myself.

2011年9月17日土曜日

Reaction to Barna

It is easy to understand because the author gives a lot of examples. and  I agree the author's opinion about  six stumbling blocks. We need to be aware of these blocks in order to avoid misunderstandings. 
Barna says that the six stumbling blocks are assumption of similarities,  language differences, nonverbal misinterpretations, preconceptions and stereotypes, tendency to evaluate and high anxiety.
However, I think tendency to evaluate is difficult to distinguish from other blocks.
In my opinion, it seems have strong connection to all other blocks. Blocks are made because people have a tendency to evaluate, in other word, people tends to evaluate other people or things by comparing with own culture, or own perspectives.
What's more, as I discussed with my classmate in class, I also realized high anxiety was connected to another blocks. All other blocks appear because accepting different culture is not easy and involves anxiety.
As stated above, categorizing blocks are not easy tusk but I agree that knowing these existence of blocks is the very first step to accept different culture and deal with problems which lies among different cultures.

2011年9月15日木曜日

New People & New Environment

Yesterday, I had the first class of AASP, Advanced Academic Speaking.
I felt nervous at first but as soon as talking with classmates, I realized that this course was wonderful!
All of them are nice and some of them has a sense of humor. They are fun to be with!
I'm not so easy-going but I think I can get along with them!


In the first class, we were divided into groups and decided the topic which we'll explain in a presentation.
My group is formed by 3 people and our topic is Yukata.
One of my group member is very funny guy so it gonna be a exciting class!haha


I'm highly motivated now because new people I met yesterday are very attractive and appealing.!
I wanna be a person like that!
Have confidence, Hisae!


Anyhow, I'll enjoy this course and do my best.

2011年9月14日水曜日

BOOK REPORT


Title
  Things Fall Apart
Author
  Chinua Achebe
Why I chose it
   By reading summery about this book, I could guess that this book is about tragic story during the era of  the introduction of Christianity into Africa by European missionaries. My high school and junior high school was established by missionaries so I feel some kind of affinity to the basis of this story.And I have never read African novel so it also made me want to read this book, of course.
An overview of the plot
   This book is about the era of introduction of Christanity into Africa, and in this story, main character, okonkwo, is described as a severe and very manly person. He believes in god of his village and persist on his tradition. However, peoples in his village begun to believe in God from Europe, Christianity. Under such a situation, okonkwo struggled to tackle to a expansion of Christianity but ended in vein. His village was changing completely, losting tradition and culture. And finally, Okonkwo decided to kill himself.
My reaction
   After I finished reading this book, I noticed that many violences appeared in this story. Main character always tried to be a violent person in order to show his strength. It also included violence toward women so it is somewhat hard to read. I also noticed that this story is always focusing on strength and weakness.I thought that in Africa, they more focus on strength but in Christianity it more focus on weakness, like sin. Of course, this is culture, so I cannot say that which is good or bad easily, though, it is true that African people inspired by this point, weakness in not a shameful thing.